Dating Profile Fix: Details Matter, Fill Them In!
Your dating profile shouldn’t be a novel, but it should definitely give potential mates an idea of who you are and why they should contact you.
Welcome to the Daily Fix, where we take snippets from real dating profiles and changes the names to protect the not-so-innocent.
Our subject today is a lovely 50-something retired lady looking for love. Let’s call her Nimue.
Before:
Im an attractive lady looking to find that special someone. Hope he is out there somewhere. I love to travel, both in here and overseas. Enjoy swimming, walking going to the cinema, eating in/out. Also enjoy watching formula 1 racing
What This Says:
Nothing, really. It’s pretty boring. Maybe she might find a fellow racing fan or world traveler. Or maybe not. It’s a snooze-fest.
If people don’t fall in love with your story, they won’t fall in love with you, Nimue. Let’s fix you up…
The Fix:
Retirement has been great to me. I’ve had time to feed my love for travel (both here and overseas), I’ve perfected my breaststroke at the local pool, and I’ve had the time to see all the movies I meant to watch years ago. (Thank you, Netflix!) I’m still looking for a place with great Chinese takeout – do you know of any in the city?
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